Good beginning. You need to work on your diction and slow down a bit. But you've got the sense of the character and his wonder at Mrs. Molloy in particular and women in general. The talking in spurts works very well for the character. Some coaching and training and you could have a lot of fun with your gifts.
Good beginning. You need to work on your diction and slow down a bit. But you've got the sense of the character and his wonder at Mrs. Molloy in particular and women in general. The talking in spurts works very well for the character. Some coaching and training and you could have a lot of fun with your gifts.
Arkelk2010 9 months ago
he is doing it rather well to tell you the truth its a play not a movie its not meant to be acted like u would screen acting.
doyouseetheirony 1 year ago
hi i am in my adv theatre class at school m think that u need more gestures and blocking and btw i am doing the same monolouge in the class right now
chipsandwhips 3 years ago
To be honest I thought it was really bad. You need training. You were talking way to fast at certain parts and you werent "realistic".
MoriahWhittaker 2 years ago
i thought it was wonderful
journaljez 3 years ago
You want my honest opinion? It was horrible!
BD3626 3 years ago