@ShallowStudios Sorta.. Like, we tried to get it done once and you were all dedicated and started inviting EVERYONE and they all got pissy so I said fuck it and you were all like "Common Ayub, have some ambition." So I thought that you deserved it because you were a dedicated body actor and if it weren't for me being all "Fuck these people!" you would have been there. So ya... Thanks (=
Honestly it felt as if the idea came from an immature gamer, but an immature gamer with a better idea of camera work and producing. I found it to be humorous, it was scripted well enough and the idea was original. The dialog of the elite was a really nice touch and made it really fun to watch for a second run, It played out well. But I still had a problem with it. Though you gentlemen usually exhibit good voice acting, the voice for Mark was a bit of an issue.
Now I'm not saying it was bad voice acting, but it was perhaps the wrong type of voice acting for the situation or just didn't match the mood being set. Mark was very loud and upset which is understandable, but the way he yelled made it sound more dramatic and perhaps a bit over done for the situation. And as he was bleeding with anger, Jack was way more calmer or at least wasn't over doing his lines.
This bad match up was also a big problem. Now once again I stress that none of you are bad voice actors. Many actors from time to time make that kind of mistake, I've seen many slip up. The real fault would probably be among the director or editor for being apathetic towards this issue.
But I suppose it was an innocent mistake, just remember to never rush a machinima and make sure you've perfected every detail of your video. That would have to be the biggest piece of advice for any machinimator, I've seen too many machinimators make that mistake. But besides the voice problem, the video was pretty okay. And even with the voice acting issue, the elites dialog made the video interesting enough to watch twice. It probably was the savior of the video.
Overall it was an interesting piece with good script work, good directing, but had a minor unfortunate mishap with one of the voices. So I'll give it probably some where from a 3.5-4/5. But because people seem to want a solid score I'll give it a 4/5. Good luck and I'm looking forward to your upcoming projects.
@TheSecondNobles HAHA! Sure, after closely working with our Bungie counterparts, we can indeed confirm... There will be weapon lowering... No movie references intended.
OMG! THAT IS A REVOLUTIONARY MARK ON MACHINIMA! THE FIRST PEOPLE TO EVR MAKE A MACHINMA WERE PEOPL FUK EACHOTHER!!! LOL, it was good!!! But whats up wit 3:41? Advertisements FTW?
I liked it up to the end, but whoever was doing the screaming in the microphone just fucked the quality right in the ear. One of the voice actors was laying it on a bit too strong, too. But the Elite's commentary was pretty great to start with.
Oh shit it's my ex
SentryIsland 3 weeks ago
"oh shit it's my ex"
firehawk2141 2 months ago
Fun fact this was done in the halo reach beta
BOXMAN666666666 7 months ago
Jack: You're a girl, right?
Brian: No.
jamesgrose510 8 months ago
Lol thumbs up if you muted the sound and just read what the Elite was saying XD
Cheddarhead7 8 months ago
.....GAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...Ahem....GAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...scuse me.
erttheking 9 months ago
sequel plox?
FoolsGil 9 months ago
unloved virgin lol wow thats grimy and they were havin fun and that elites commentary was like wtf
emoup72 10 months ago
Lol
IsaiaMclovin 11 months ago
also, needs more views
FoolsGil 1 year ago
HA HA OH WOW. Seriously this was sick and kind of hot for some reason, lol
FoolsGil 1 year ago
WUT
mikaroo222 1 year ago
Siege: Wait, did i really body act in this? I don't remember at all haha.
ShallowStudios 1 year ago
@ShallowStudios Sorta.. Like, we tried to get it done once and you were all dedicated and started inviting EVERYONE and they all got pissy so I said fuck it and you were all like "Common Ayub, have some ambition." So I thought that you deserved it because you were a dedicated body actor and if it weren't for me being all "Fuck these people!" you would have been there. So ya... Thanks (=
RedDadaFilms 1 year ago
Well of all the machinimas I've come across thus far this has to be the one of the most.. Interesting pieces I've seen.
kraploadapie 1 year ago
Honestly it felt as if the idea came from an immature gamer, but an immature gamer with a better idea of camera work and producing. I found it to be humorous, it was scripted well enough and the idea was original. The dialog of the elite was a really nice touch and made it really fun to watch for a second run, It played out well. But I still had a problem with it. Though you gentlemen usually exhibit good voice acting, the voice for Mark was a bit of an issue.
kraploadapie 1 year ago
Now I'm not saying it was bad voice acting, but it was perhaps the wrong type of voice acting for the situation or just didn't match the mood being set. Mark was very loud and upset which is understandable, but the way he yelled made it sound more dramatic and perhaps a bit over done for the situation. And as he was bleeding with anger, Jack was way more calmer or at least wasn't over doing his lines.
kraploadapie 1 year ago
This bad match up was also a big problem. Now once again I stress that none of you are bad voice actors. Many actors from time to time make that kind of mistake, I've seen many slip up. The real fault would probably be among the director or editor for being apathetic towards this issue.
kraploadapie 1 year ago
But I suppose it was an innocent mistake, just remember to never rush a machinima and make sure you've perfected every detail of your video. That would have to be the biggest piece of advice for any machinimator, I've seen too many machinimators make that mistake. But besides the voice problem, the video was pretty okay. And even with the voice acting issue, the elites dialog made the video interesting enough to watch twice. It probably was the savior of the video.
kraploadapie 1 year ago
Overall it was an interesting piece with good script work, good directing, but had a minor unfortunate mishap with one of the voices. So I'll give it probably some where from a 3.5-4/5. But because people seem to want a solid score I'll give it a 4/5. Good luck and I'm looking forward to your upcoming projects.
kraploadapie 1 year ago
ewwwwwww.
matrox999 1 year ago
i will plant my eggs in you!!
PWNarmored 1 year ago
Lol can you confirm wep lowering?
TheSecondNobles 1 year ago
@TheSecondNobles HAHA! Sure, after closely working with our Bungie counterparts, we can indeed confirm... There will be weapon lowering... No movie references intended.
RedDadaFilms 1 year ago
@RedDadaFilms On LIVE? And you work with bungie?
TheSecondNobles 1 year ago
Hepalbum!
Jakid14 1 year ago
The banshee man stole the show!
EpicGoosinFilms 1 year ago
wtfuck lul that wuz epic "shit its my ex"
evilHamsterzZz 1 year ago
Wow Ayub, u would!
ThuJakid 1 year ago
LOL! That was funny! How did you guys get Reach so early?
flamingsamurai16703 1 year ago
hahaha lolololol @RebelliousComic this is definetly a "REVOLUTIONARY MARK ON MACHINIMA!"
bbdgamer 1 year ago
OMG! THAT IS A REVOLUTIONARY MARK ON MACHINIMA! THE FIRST PEOPLE TO EVR MAKE A MACHINMA WERE PEOPL FUK EACHOTHER!!! LOL, it was good!!! But whats up wit 3:41? Advertisements FTW?
RebelliousComic 1 year ago
The screaming at the end was too much. But otherwise it was damn funny!
speedy1231292 1 year ago
lolz
HARDcoreAWESOMENESSS 1 year ago
I feel so violated. lol good one tho ayub
frostyprofilms 1 year ago
I liked it up to the end, but whoever was doing the screaming in the microphone just fucked the quality right in the ear. One of the voice actors was laying it on a bit too strong, too. But the Elite's commentary was pretty great to start with.
GhostG40 1 year ago
@GhostG40 Finally some constructive criticism! Thanks man, the world needs more of you. (=
RedDadaFilms 1 year ago
Amazing, especially the banshee at the end.
Arbiter617 1 year ago
Awesome. Wrong, but so very awesome.
Runescythe9852 1 year ago
lol! brian?
Shad0wSquirrel 1 year ago
wtf
sgtbadass1 1 year ago
Beta or jtag?
movi3mak3r2000 1 year ago
@movi3mak3r2000 Beta. Isn't there like a rule that Jtag gets you kicked off of live or something?
RedDadaFilms 1 year ago
@RedDadaFilms not if you play offline or put a special code thing to be undetectable thts how mw2 lobbies r made
movi3mak3r2000 1 year ago
@RedDadaFilms Yes
JDGlassProductions 1 year ago