Great job, Chris! Keep at it--you're a natural.
lonelynote15 2 years ago
DUDE, Chris this is freaking outstanding. I really is getting way better. I like the slower pace. I recommend pulling the "that'd be weird" tangents though. however everything else was awesome.
kylecease 2 years ago 2
Nice work. I'm glad to see you're getting out there. I swear to God you're a 44 year old man trapped in a 17 year old body.
You're a good joke writer.
My one bit of advice (which you didn't ask for so you can say shut up if you want) is: wait for the laugh.
And, a bonus piece of advice (which you didn't ask for but old people will do this now and then): Keep at it. You WILL succeed if you persist.
So there.
StuBakerComedy 2 years ago 3
good work
boywithacoin2 2 years ago
sounds alot like Kyle Cease....
captaincobalt3466 2 years ago
Great job, Chris! Keep at it--you're a natural.
lonelynote15 2 years ago
DUDE, Chris this is freaking outstanding. I really is getting way better. I like the slower pace. I recommend pulling the "that'd be weird" tangents though. however everything else was awesome.
kylecease 2 years ago 2
Nice work. I'm glad to see you're getting out there. I swear to God you're a 44 year old man trapped in a 17 year old body.
You're a good joke writer.
My one bit of advice (which you didn't ask for so you can say shut up if you want) is: wait for the laugh.
And, a bonus piece of advice (which you didn't ask for but old people will do this now and then): Keep at it. You WILL succeed if you persist.
So there.
StuBakerComedy 2 years ago 3
good work
boywithacoin2 2 years ago
sounds alot like Kyle Cease....
captaincobalt3466 2 years ago