Can you be my? ( poetry read by Laith) :)

[BWBMakeup]

That's beautiful Laith :) x

[resastar200]

Yes i can be yours (:

[mrrayzor1995]

Relax, he isn't gay -_- the most feminine guys can be straight and the most masculine guys can be gay

[OCezara]

no im in canada and its still gayy :)))) marlon come and save dis mofo :)

[mixedmamiiD]

I'll be yours ;)

[08ggirl08]

you're extremely sexy and your drawing is amazing. just thought i'd let you know.

[cloudsurfer73]

too cliche but you have potential :)

I think you can be REALLY good, you just need some emotion.

I love that you love poetry and drawing (like me), I think it's cool that you like the arts. I want to see one of your drawing, do u show it in another video?

[BrooklyntoBrixton]

Canada guys are so weird to me. If he was from Brooklyn I'd automatically assume he was gay. But I guess Toronto is different than NYC. The black guys are a lot more suburban and sensitive.

[futuresonicc]

@BrooklyntoBrixton he's just one guy who doesn't define all of toronto

[muzikmami1]

@BrooklyntoBrixton maybe your just very closed minded, as well as all other americans, having sensitive thoughts are normal. Canadians SPEAK their minds.

[BrooklyntoBrixton]

@muzikmami1 Oh I didn't mean his poetry. I meant his overall demeanor and style. He's feminine, and there's nothing wrong with that. I'm just not used to emo, suburban kids of color. Guys his age where I'm from are sneaker-heads. An more into watching the game than making youtube vids.

[minniem103]

@BrooklyntoBrixton he isn't even black so you're statement is automatically invalid....But your opinion is yours so...

[BrooklyntoBrixton]

@minniem103 Lmao he isn't? White people always want to separate black people. If he's Latino or mixed he's still of African descent which would make him BLACK.

[minniem103]

@BrooklyntoBrixton I'm not white if that's what you're implying. And I'm not saying that it's impossible for him to have someone back in his family that was of African decent, but he isn't straight up black. I've seen a picture of his dad

[BitchGotAVJAY]

The question is CAN YOU BE MINE?

[AdLuvsYou]

Very nice... Keep it up

[MsShortyy100]

omg i can be your anything<3



[SkylaYuhLoveShawty]

Does anybody know the lyrics

[BabyGirl1147]

aww, this was nice.

[StayTrueSteeze]

LOVE THIS. <3

[Tropical8D]

aww sweet :)

[Riversofliquidlove]

how sweet ;p

[Jadoredaniix3]

all i could say is yumm yumm yumm yumm yumm, delicioso ;) mmmm.. laith, you are too freaking gorgeous & sexy matter a fact? i think it's a sin for you to look so delicious ;)

[sw33tabii]

I wanted to say 'Yes i can' But to be like everyone else wud ruin my plans of being the one u see differently but indefinetly unforgetably the best comment BOOM!

[diva7fyi]

Okay everyone, we understand he's extremel attractive! Let's focus on the point --> He has wonderful poetry and a great voice. Keep doin what you do Laith ! <3

[JaeMaJic]

Nice poem =) @Drenalyn do you still write poetry?

[PYT4EVA11]

great poem laith , very sweet keep it up

[TheSkittlelishis]

i can be yours!! ur are 2 cute

[BlackBuddha777]

I've jerked off to his videos like a millions times lol

[emotionful]

@BlackBuddha777 me too haha!!!

[MissDomzie]

I love you.

[MissDomzie]

Yes.....yes I can be yours. <3

[Nicky981234]

i can be yours..

[mariemicaelareyes]

I love this. - Micaela

[napturalkassie]

that was so sweet(:

[ang3lface07]

your gal is lucky dude>>>thumbs up

[ohheyitsjennzii]

Laith you are truly amazing . I cried when I saw the love between you and Christina it opened my eyes . Love has no boundaries

[LatinaFlavaa]

how can 1 person be so sexy. damn!

[aboobooka]

=)

[thapryncess3]

hell yea i can be ur

[omyface88899]

That was so amazing, you are turly talented

[TheDutchied]

i will be everything <3 <3

[BarbieDuo]

That was so beautiful!!He's an artist,poet and hot...Canada has the greatest guys ever!!!

[AneeTA166]

amazing<3 what beautiful words!

[BlondieeG]

-I Love It Ur Talented Dude...

[BeRealPRESENTS]

this is beautiful

[ladyeerudasz]

wow you are sooo talented stay up and keep doing your thing

[nataniaclarks]

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!

[TheMwendawazimu]

Yes I will be yours

[aalenina]

I heart you.

[yanababy0592]

yes!

[Thesunnie101]

Uhh yeah that was amazzinn -3 keep it up :)

[1993neasha]

Your poem was so amazeingg !! and your so adorable : ) 

[TDndPR76]

Whers my jaw? On the ground ha I'm in love(:

[MYSTUFF123]

I THINK IM IN LOVE...

[00lyricist]

I love it . 

[chaachii03141994]

i liked...n im also an artist...=)

[Myvision211]

the poem was intelligent, sweet and very well delivered. That together with the cute face of yours...hmmm....baby I luv it



[MsdawanaAl]

Oh. My. Gosh ! He's Gorgeous !

[maymaymartin502]

It's nice

[Arabiancupcake]

Hey mayn, why you so adorable?

[OMGitsmee92]

damn, if you were a vj at much i would def go to MOD often lmaooo, goodluck!

[Jessyboo626]

Awwhh this was awesome I enjoyed that alot! But yeahhh where did the brain sex vid go!?

[DiamondGirl247365]

WHERED THE BRAIN SEX VIDEO GO ????!!! :(

tht and this one were a few of my favs... brain sex was honestly the first thing tht inspired me to try spoken words. Now i have a performance on friday n the vid is gone ?! lol.. whyyy?

[swagbg]

i hate the 'can you be my' after every sentence doesnt flow

[bondifiedshawty]

floating on the cloudsss yooo

[TheAnomaly2890]

These comments are a true THIRST FEST! LMBO!

[MyAlexIsHere]

Bro u r so hot an ur voice is amazing an the poem was really good. Im an artist too

[Lalax43]

I love your voice and intelligence < 3

[friendlymusiclover]

Awhh you did great .

[ShaneDawsonFan691]

If i had a dollar for every pixel in this video, i would have $0.50. LOL

LOVE YOU! :*

[Miss123kittykat]

ssssseeeeeeeeeexxxxxxxaaaayyyy­yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy Xx

[breezyracksonracks]

<3

[kenzo081010]

Come to Sweden and be mine :)

[rawrheidi]

can you be mine ..

[xlzmamiflyy]

yur are soo handsome &d the fact that you can write this way makes you incredibly beautiful <3

[sofiaeri]

good job .

[SaucyShorts]

that was sweet :)

[liamjlewis]

Gave me goosebumps. On my vagina.

[NikitaMariia]

@liamjlewis lol

[4islandbeauty]

Beautiful thank you for sharing with us!

[s3xiicanI1548]

You did read it as if you were doing just that but hopefully by this time you've gotten better this is the fikrst video of you that I've seen but you've got good material it's just when you perform your poetry reach inside dnt just let the words roll off of your tounge, TRUE poetry is something that can be felt by those who hear it,

[jizzypuff]

you make me doubt all my talents as a writer :/ im jealous

[Jessilou1512]

OMG!! I LOVE IT!!!

Thing that made my day though,

"Be my everything. YOU PISS ME OFF!" hahaha(:

Its great!! Your really good at what you do!

And you and your gf are amazing together(:

[missjazmintorres]

Your amazing.

[asiapalmer1]

I can b all that and more, seriously if u single hit me up is very rare to find a gift like u n this world. So i ask can u be my.. ??? The one that can do all n more of that n your poem :) (peace n love)

[Reallionarex3]

gave me goosebumps.

[ingriddoll90]

*sigh* nuff said.tonight, you are my dream :)

[MrWochit]

Can you be my...piece of tissue i wanna wipe my ass with?

[CJLydia]

Im inlove with you, Laith.

[kkbearxoxo]

:D i am in lovvve with you

[xovenuss]

love this

[MsKNeverson]

yes, i can be yours !

[rissa271]

That was really good :)

[hannastayfly]

hes sooooo sexyyyy (:

[MsGabbylove23]

That was truly beautiful :)

[2moonsforlife]

Nice Burberry shirt.

[junirish]

they are so perfect together



[OMGitsNERYxx]

-3 i fell in love with your poetry !!

[L0On3yTun3z]

3:10 <33333333 lol ur voice is beautiful

[rachelious101]

oh my goodness i was close to tears........ik u think tht u didnt do well but....u got me.

[SuperNicole0812]

That's really good. Ur very talented. Keep it up. Its nice to see a young man being productive and so passionate. :) 

[mekkahandmarnie]

YOU SHOULD MAKE THIS INTO A SONG.

[Kiisha03]

I really liked the poem :)

[Damiabbey213]

Honestly tho,I personally love and I also write poetry but gutta admit that was deep mann...keep it up:)

[StassiPryce]

sheeeesh , eye candy on steroidsssss x2 !!! <3 .

[roxyrockur]

Yo that was hot .!

[EmmanuellaAngie]

umm , wow sad that all these people are paying attention to are your looks , but ANIWAYSS ... that poem iss beautifull && the way uu said i , i could feel the passion in it , && haha @ that you piss me off part , but aww its nice , keep writting poetry you're good at it (:

[MzAshliiy]

That was beautiful :D

[RavenandNexus]

Marry me.

[derumlojo]

No, he did pretty good!

[pekipeki92]

yes . santini can be ur everything .

[PrettyGurlSummer15]

I can't believe im just seeing this omg..you have my vote..this is beautiful :) and you are sooooooo HOT!!!

[babyxkande]

can u move to brampton? aint no guys like u around here. anyways your poem is sweet, keep on doing ur thing. u got real talent <3

[zeehyde2000]

Manna I swear u are da best post I so far have Eva seen in my hole life and keep writing

[07poetry]

you have talent..keep writing..hmm maybe the next wale?

[romyrawr]

Three words: yes I can.

[yungswagbabi93]

omg u are amazing maybe i well send you copy my work u could tell me what im doing wrong

[OSoOfficalSwagg]

jesus i pray to ur parent cuz goddamn u look gud.! plz make a mocospace

[hauteCJM]

Can you be my FUTURE MAN??!! dude..you are too HOT for your own good!!!!!

[mizzezfizz0]

I'll Be Whatever You Want Baby (:

Really Nice Though. Liked It Alot.

[emilyyyymaeeee1234]

Hey your poetry is really good! I am a poet too and it is neat to see who else is out there that is interested in the same thing (: Keep striving!

[dreamkjw]

Laith;) I liked this alot I watched your other one and I liked that one too, you should post more videos like these....I write some but I dnt show any one;0

[sharekajackson]

yes i can be your......

[sharekajackson]

yes i can be your

[xoxoFreakygurl47]

that was good! very deep! Keep up the good work!

[Jwall096]

That was beautiful to say the least...its a turn on but for all the right reasons if that makes any sence hah

[missdarkredlipstick]

im a poet my self, and i think this poem is really great. And that drawing was fantastic also. Much respect for the arts <3

[coolio189]

i think im in love :$

[TheNeonSmiles]

for this being your first read off its good, you did have some pauses & some little mistakes but with some more practice it will be even better

you should do another one to see how far you've gone in you'r practice

[PrincessJazzy15]

<3

[Courtney101wink]

Yes ... yes i can :')

[sonard12]

You are sexy!!! Damn! Can you be mine??

[sonard12]

You are sexy as shit!!! Damn!

[beauty09891]

that was amazing but one of the things that spoken wordist arent suppose to do before they go on stage is talk so much about there peice and i notice you do that a lot when you do that you make the audience loose the hype of your words

[jackiiebaby89]

That was great. Good job! I Hope you keep on writting! :)

[calibestkiki]

Damn! you are finnnnnee haha (= That was really goooood by the way lol

[musicxmaniac1]

you are finnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnne<3

but so is your mindd.

[xoxkeihaxox]

wow, let me just say you are amazing =) helps that you're cute made me want to watch your video can't even deny that but on some realshit you are a great spoken word artist your drawing is awesome and did I mention you were gorgeous??!! Yah anyways stay sweet keep writing I write a bit too and you totally just inspired me to write more and maybe even post some =)

[Sossie16]

Oh my goodness!..I write and draw too..and I've been contemplatin for the longest on whether or not to post them on YouTube..I loved it..tho you should put more emotion into it..the poem was nice.. : )

[kodakmomments]

soooo good!

[missbre911]

that was soo soothing..i enjoyed it..thats the shit..keep doing your thing man!!

[donshay2010]

i could be your everything!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[briehubaby]

your great... i'm definitely feeling this. i write too...working on performing...still afraid of the stage.

keep writing

[aocelinee]

marry me <3

[lary8rojas]

yes i can....=)

[sydnetmoore315]

you can draw and write poetry and you fine sounds like a reipple threat...lol... btw whats a VJ?

[PoetiicKiid]

So, I like it. This is OLD you need to upload more poems. But, your introduction is TOO LONG. Just say your title and get into it. Also, talk in a more natural voice. And keep writing, cuz soon your metaphors are gonna be on point. But good job.

[BKstrong917]

so in a nut shell- 1. speak like you speak naturally- in a talking voice but still evoke emotion when necsry, but emotion is NOT vanilla ice- (im sorry, sincerely, but that who i thought of) i can only tell u that because i know u have it in u to be yourself cuz ive heard you xplain your poetry sooo beautifully and natural. DONT change it when its time to spit IT! and 2. PLEASE get more creative-think outside box. and YOUR STRAIGHT..hit me back if you wants sum help. i gotchu

[BKstrong917]

im not hating or being mean, i wanna see you win! push your self harder.. REEAALLYY listen to what im suggesting and WIN with it. if i told you my accomplishments off of what i just said to you, you'd truly listen.. im only sharing, cuz i care. God Bless..i cant wait to see more with your new skills!

[BKstrong917]

and you have to be careful of sounding courny over evoking emotion. sound NATURAL. you sounded great when u were speaking about your poem- but when it was time to spit (ur other poem 2 this TOTALLY APPLIES 2 also) it sounded non-believable. like "action" make me believe you. 2. think outside the box.. i hear what ur saying but your not saqying anything i havent already heard. THINK think punchlines, unpredictable...not "girl u so pretty i want u 2 have me baby" (u dint say it, but u mide as wel)

[BKstrong917]

okay... im gonna be completely honest with you..just so u know im only helping and not hating ive won 3 spoken word slams, detroit, ny, and DC 2007, 08, 09... NOW..i luv that u puy urself out there and are reaching for your creative side..however... ive watched ur other video and obvs this one and my words of advice to improve...1. speak naturally. u know how u talk when ur explaining your poem b4 u spit ur poem...? use that same voice. theres a difference from emotion to courny diction.. contd

[SomethingxDIFFERENT]

that was pretty good yu should put up some more =)

[BeautifullBonitaa]

He honestly is the most beautiful guy ive ever seen. GOD! Why im in montreal =(

[Desttinyy]

@BeautifullBonitaa Then you don't go out much :P

[afrostar8]

nice homie def some shit > sice flow, a semi pause a drwan out word here and there eye contact. connect ! belive whut is is your reading bruh. other then that thats whussup.

novaa

[Drenalyn]

lol i never practised it.. ur right.. i just decided to put it up.. for my first read off the computer.. i think i did pretty well

[heeeygirlheey]

you amaze me ! i'd love to be yours haha ;)

i could honestly listen to you speak for hours.

how long have you been writing for ?

[Meandnotyou]

That was good and not 3 stars good but 5 stars good, if you had actually practiced it probably would have been even better.

[Shhhhhhhweta]

you are soooooo hot and you totally have my vote :) good luck!!

[LindaLuztono]

Double L! Boooooyah! LL

P.S. You're HOT!

[thatgirlsuzy]

you seem like a cool guy so u have my vote..tehe

that poem was dope though

[Starruh89]

sweet, you should hear my poem, lol

[elektra866]

that was really good.