Internal Rhyming

[Leaphchausew]

I showed this to my year 10 class. :)

[Warrenz79]

Tremendous

[vidaa82]

man that is so sweet. i love internal rhyming.

[furryburger66]

Brilliant as well

[Warrenz79]

Delighted

[wallyboxer]

Oh yeah, liking it m8

[Warrenz79]

Cool

[pick8lock]

@wallyboxer

aussies!!!

[pinklantana]

That was excellent! :)

[Warrenz79]

^_^

[scobyknife2]

sure i got this one already you sent it again he he sum1 is fishen for compliments he he he

[Warrenz79]

Wotchya talkin' boud Willis? ^_~

[scobyknife2]

you sent me this vid after i commented on it and rated it but its still good baby its still good

[Warrenz79]

IC said the blind man..I figured out how to use that share thing and I guess you're on the list

[scobyknife2]

i c said the blind man a whole in the wall shut up said the deaf man you cant see at all

[BaByPhAt8LiAh101]

this is f-in wonderful 4real

[ZedralZ]

That was great! Your pen is indeed mightier than the sword, good sir.

[jovic88]

WOW WARREN, YOU IMPRESSED ME WITH YOUR PEN

youre a great poet, very interesting sonnet

i have to stop and sit, coz i really like it

your poem so beautiful, my friend so wonderful

now i have to save this, it brings me a sudden bliss

jovic

[Warrenz79]

Salamat kaibigan ko..he he ^_^

[jovic88]

walang anuman  (no problem) hehehe

[scobyknife2]

i noticed a couple of things you got a new camera your left handed and your good at poetry nice vid

[Warrenz79]

Aw haw mm hum

[knpb]

VERY GOOD WARREN...INTERESTING...you have the poetic touch !

I will send you my own poetry site in a day or so...when I know it is up and running for sure...

Keep writing and keep me in touch with the work...tanx..k

[Warrenz79]

No probs hun ^_^

[cheekychen]

thanks for sharing! loving the first verse

[Warrenz79]

Cool beans m8

[Warrenz79]

Cheers Nancy

[nancyleeould]

An excellent example of internal rhyming.

Well done.

Hugs~Nancy