Funny, I just found myself thinking that this would actually be an interesting story to write! Did you ever get to writing it yourself? Anyway, this is really helpfull. I've finished writing two novels and always start out spending ages coming up with a detailed plot. I think using this structure in the future might make it easier for me to come up with a solid plot faster so i can get to the fun part of actually writing the story!
The unique thing about your instruction is that you yourself are organic; you show and don't merely tell. You are a great teacher and I've been searching for a long time for someone like you. Thanks.
Thankyou for explaining this to me. I thought every character was supposed to be described, like, you had to say his/her hair color, how tall, eye color, and all that. thankyou again.
i'm in awe.. your awesome! this is helping me so much, i haven't been able to piece together a good story since the first one (and i was four when that happened, and it was a terrible story lol)
It kind of reminds me of iRobot with Will Smith. He liked sweets and was into old school stuff. Chuck Taylors,driving for himself,his radio. I break down stories all the time. This series is helping me with my stories that I write.
Good stuff man. I was getting stuck with my writing, i can come up with ideas but didn't really have a 'road map' to get where i wanted to go. This is great for that. Its like how i used to write music with a specific formula, it made it alot easier. Cheers.
Funny, I just found myself thinking that this would actually be an interesting story to write! Did you ever get to writing it yourself? Anyway, this is really helpfull. I've finished writing two novels and always start out spending ages coming up with a detailed plot. I think using this structure in the future might make it easier for me to come up with a solid plot faster so i can get to the fun part of actually writing the story!
katviolet176 3 weeks ago
@katviolet176 I did end up writing it.
architectus777 3 weeks ago
The unique thing about your instruction is that you yourself are organic; you show and don't merely tell. You are a great teacher and I've been searching for a long time for someone like you. Thanks.
ddsharper 1 year ago
poor jack.
trandomphatguy 1 year ago
"the reader likes to feel that their smart" lmao!!! soo true
Envoid344 1 year ago
Sometimes you have to let the characters say things instead of describing them in the book.
Starfall3 1 year ago
sis raped by alien...
Gooodwitch 2 years ago
great story
deatheart360 2 years ago
Thankyou for explaining this to me. I thought every character was supposed to be described, like, you had to say his/her hair color, how tall, eye color, and all that. thankyou again.
totallymoah 2 years ago
Thank you everyone. I'm glad these videos have helped you.
architectus777 2 years ago
good story except 4 d space bit
bcarls50 2 years ago
I don't recall a part about 4d space.
architectus777 2 years ago 5
It all comes natural to kno the ending. When I write short stories, the ending is always what I came up first
Nades129 2 years ago
i'm in awe.. your awesome! this is helping me so much, i haven't been able to piece together a good story since the first one (and i was four when that happened, and it was a terrible story lol)
L3G3ND14 2 years ago
It kind of reminds me of iRobot with Will Smith. He liked sweets and was into old school stuff. Chuck Taylors,driving for himself,his radio. I break down stories all the time. This series is helping me with my stories that I write.
brotdw 2 years ago 3
Jack is kinda like Jones and the fedora. And by the way if this was a movie I would watch it.
brotdw 2 years ago 5
Good stuff man. I was getting stuck with my writing, i can come up with ideas but didn't really have a 'road map' to get where i wanted to go. This is great for that. Its like how i used to write music with a specific formula, it made it alot easier. Cheers.
Diocletian09 3 years ago 4
@Diocletian09 good job
people775 1 year ago