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From: architectus777
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  • Funny, I just found myself thinking that this would actually be an interesting story to write! Did you ever get to writing it yourself? Anyway, this is really helpfull. I've finished writing two novels and always start out spending ages coming up with a detailed plot. I think using this structure in the future might make it easier for me to come up with a solid plot faster so i can get to the fun part of actually writing the story!

  • @katviolet176 I did end up writing it.

  • The unique thing about your instruction is that you yourself are organic; you show and don't merely tell. You are a great teacher and I've been searching for a long time for someone like you. Thanks.

  • poor jack.

  • "the reader likes to feel that their smart" lmao!!! soo true

  • Sometimes you have to let the characters say things instead of describing them in the book.

  • sis raped by alien...

  • great story

  • Thankyou for explaining this to me. I thought every character was supposed to be described, like, you had to say his/her hair color, how tall, eye color, and all that. thankyou again.

  • Thank you everyone. I'm glad these videos have helped you.

  • good story except 4 d space bit

  • I don't recall a part about 4d space.

  • It all comes natural to kno the ending. When I write short stories, the ending is always what I came up first

  • i'm in awe.. your awesome! this is helping me so much, i haven't been able to piece together a good story since the first one (and i was four when that happened, and it was a terrible story lol)

  • It kind of reminds me of iRobot with Will Smith. He liked sweets and was into old school stuff. Chuck Taylors,driving for himself,his radio. I break down stories all the time. This series is helping me with my stories that I write.

  • Jack is kinda like Jones and the fedora. And by the way if this was a movie I would watch it.

  • Good stuff man. I was getting stuck with my writing, i can come up with ideas but didn't really have a 'road map' to get where i wanted to go. This is great for that. Its like how i used to write music with a specific formula, it made it alot easier. Cheers.

  • @Diocletian09 good job

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