Nice work. However, there are a few things you may have missed. Your ambiant sound was too aparent at one point; I could hear the change in sound as the shots changed. Secondly, the rack focuses seem a bit...sloppy around the place. Perhaps that was intended? Lastly, your actor's stubble and facial hair was off putting and distracting. If that was intended, well done, if not, use either clean shaven or beardfull actors in the future.
Nice work. However, there are a few things you may have missed. Your ambiant sound was too aparent at one point; I could hear the change in sound as the shots changed. Secondly, the rack focuses seem a bit...sloppy around the place. Perhaps that was intended? Lastly, your actor's stubble and facial hair was off putting and distracting. If that was intended, well done, if not, use either clean shaven or beardfull actors in the future.
ElJonoGuy 3 months ago
@ElJonoGuy i like the stubble
tommyconroy 2 months ago