Rock bottom eminem original rap

[NordsHigh]

Must say that was dope yo but like a lot of ppl said already u gotta get ur own style workin it's in process I can tell by your lyrics but just keep it goin. I'm also using slims beats to help me get started. Haven't got anything recorded yet but I got pages of writings just lookin for my style. Stay strong bro

[handsumbwndrful]

No, not a freestyle, lol I wish, Written just like all them but 100 percent original!! Anyone have any ideas on how to tag it to get more views??

[Pain715]

kinda look like lil wyte lol, but 100% better. killa

[bhavyesingh97]

WOW! AWESOME?

[jeffypooz]

Also looked like he was lookin at somthing on the desk...freestyle? Nah

[jeffypooz]

Hey can wright and has a good voice... But no style of his own... Thats eminen's style....

[jeffypooz]

Was bitting style...

[DocThaMicrofiend]

Hey Man U Really Did a Great JOb On this Track Keep Up the Hard Work... I Just did a Freestlye to THis Myself. CHeck it out if you dont mind N tell me what you think

[AnonyManORG]

I Have question,will you make more raps?, its really great you did!

[StolenLettuce]

good stuff

[echo7925]

Damn dude holding it down for white rappers. u kinda inspired me ive been bumping em since i was like 10 but i dont got skills like u. im working on it. keep um comeing,gunna be rich one dayyyy!

[Ontoki]

Bravo... Did not expect that shit... Aaaaat alll..

[Stryker11000]

Good shit bro! Keep this shit going, Im in PR and I would promote this! Stay up!

[soulflow1dlprod]

u good just lean off yo own swag not ems

[handsumbwndrful]

All your comments make my day!! Thanks allot I have been busy working and hunting these days but will post some more vids soon! Thanks again!

[shreeddin]

nice yo

[Ra1ndropproductions]

youd get signed imma talk to my friends dad about this he works for dre

[OrangeJuiceAndCake1]

this is brilliant man, you should try and get on t.v somehow, you'd deffinately make it high up! much love man

[DevinTheKid1]

hey, can i give u a tip, no offence u have potential and nice lyrics but u wont make it in the hip hop world if u dont find your own flow. I think eminem inspired you and thats y your chasing his flow a bit, try and make it unique, but you got me to look after the names DEVIN CARROLL. lol haha

[valde4ever96]

Dope man f**king underated!

[jakemthws18]

finally a white rapper that KNOWS how to rap! nice

[11YungN]

nice dude...

go listen ta my shit

[eddieguerrero122]

You good

[MikeyMassacre429]

Holy shit! That was mad unexpected. Murdered the beat harder than Em did. keep it up bro.

[thooper2710]

damn son keep that shit up, Ur good n got something to look forward to in life

[noahmanggg]

thought it was gunna be lame. it wasn't. nice rhymes, decent flow, you were obviously feeling your own shit. keep it up.

[MegaComedy777]

AMazing ! check out mine i started this not long ago !

[ragerange33]

nice vid i think you smashed it. but how long did it take you to come up with that? thats what i want to know.

[eukillmiguel]

you should diss lil wayne xD

[geothahero]

look up chris calamity and geo tha hero and its called john going ham chris and george i chris the heavy set one would liuke to know what you think about my part you my friend are sick

[entertheste]

haha wernt expectin that man u killed it. u my friend are talented.

[paradiseburned]

You just made me smile :)

[TheJohnboy700]

Go ham!

[ScottyTeach920]

dude this is really good, like better than lil wayne shit, keep writing man. youll think of this stuff quicker if you keep writing and youll be pouring out raps

[handsumbwndrful]

Thanks again guys and yes my real voice!

[MultiBowles]

@handsumbwndrful you man we should collab

[ROCKYFEST13]

i like it

[ThadleyMusic]

Dope!!

[smoove002]

haha this is good

[Flapppinwing]

IS THAT YOUR REAL VOICE ?

[Flapppinwing]

this is amazing nice i like it!!!!!!!!

[dranraper4]

dope as fuck had my head rockin, much respect.

[YaBoy4shortYB]

why dont you go ham an just freestyle it

[bakerkiddudeirule82]

Haha that was pretty sick bro...... The voice fits the rap

[slipknot517]

Was not expecting that good shit. lol

Pretty cold

[handsumbwndrful]

Thanks guys, def. will put up some more verses soon! I appreciate all the comments!

[EffinSmart]

@handsumbwndrful there's a studio in every state.... go there, and pay whatever you have to cause your good and i guarantee you'd get quite a few fans fast

[theELUSIV]

good shit main. its good 2 see MC's actually havin the balls to spit there rhymes in camera instead of just typing there where arse rhymes on instrumental pages reppin themselves up like theyre all that. Ive just finished to a song to this beat ma self im booked in at the recordin studio in 3 weeks so i'll flick u a msg once it's done.

Keep representin.....

[bigbignobody]

crap that was sick. just set the frikin camera down it gave me a headache lol

[TheRESVES]

i tought at first that u would suck , but it was really good you were really feelin it lol

ps u gotta learn to swallow lol

[i7like7to7trip7]

Dude that was pretty fuckin sweet

[MOJO0514]

Dude that was pretty ILL!!!! Good Chit!!!! It's good to see another fellow white boy lyricist layin chit down!

[perezmarcos1]

nice bro, im putting some raps together for this instrumental too lol... like my page on fb plz.... Little Em on pages