sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooodumbbbbbbbbbb and wth detenchun?????
Everyone shut the fuck up let the kid do what he wants to do cause in the future if he's big i bet he's gonna find all you haters and spit on your face !
Ok 1st stop trying to be black 2nd dont use that fake voice 3rd find a larger vocabulary and more multi syllable words 4th nails dont rot they rust ;)
hey i made a rap song too my very first one but god damn this is really bad and im just beginning, i wouldn't mind giving you some advice if you asked.
mind checking out my song on my channel? i wrote it, its my very first song ever rapped from me so i would like some feedback.
cmon man. you gotta speed up. it look like yous readin from a screen dog. please.. your in what? 5th grade? im in school to.. never use school as a rap subject. opinion. and get better raps. have you ever even heard rap? cuz man you gotta no this is breakin the law. no offense. sorry to be harsh.
anyone like this rap (at least more than his) please leave me a comment about what you liked, or even send me your own rap, and trust me...it CAN'T be worse than his!
words...can't.....describe.....how much......i.....will......FUCKING KILL YOU!!!!! i mean DAMNIT kid! can't you hear how much you suck?! i mean my god! and i lick dick? wtf was that?! and finally, school is NOT the reason YOU'RE a fool...and you probably get detention and probation and stuff cuz u piss the hell out of everyone with your lame ass rhymes!!!!!!
BITCH!!! you suck ass! i mean...GAWD YOU SUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dude you give all white rappers a bad name! i mean come on! i suck, but there's two things that seperate me from you:
1. i KNOW i suck
2. i don't suck AS much as YOU!!!
(p.s.) if anyone wants me to make a better rhyme than him RIGHT now, i'll do it.
nooo, just stop tryin man, like really, half of the real guetto people actualy want to go to school, and get an education, but they have to work or help out there familys, like really, ur not too cool budd
that was the most terrible thing ive ever heard in my life,, i even heard a half a retard that used 2 b in my highschool sing better rhymes.. n he cudnt even barely finnish a senetnce when he talked... like wow.... POSER OR WUT lmfao
This kid goes right up the butthole with this rhyme...
NappaSuper77 1 month ago
LOL
thaCOD3X 1 month ago
your the definition of a emo rapper. faget
bmxfor4ever120 1 month ago
definaly ill be thowIN saucers everyday just to get around
XxSnoBoardingCOxX 2 months ago
get a life....
XxSnoBoardingCOxX 2 months ago
dumb dumb
XxSnoBoardingCOxX 2 months ago
DISLIKE O.o
XxSnoBoardingCOxX 2 months ago
sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooodumbbbbbbbbbb and wth detenchun?????
XxSnoBoardingCOxX 2 months ago
do u hate ur life becaude u r a dork
BigGExtreme 2 months ago
Lool.
krazycrarie 3 months ago
u like what?............Gay person
BigGExtreme 3 months ago
@BigGExtreme lolz so true.
tracyyangrocks 2 months ago
u make white peapole look bad u asshole
sgzrjgfgbsrh 6 months ago
they only put retards in detintion and if u went to jail u would still want ur new envy u r a grade a dumbass
xjuggalo97x 6 months ago
U blow out the ass
jjjjjts 7 months ago
i bet he is reading the words off that computer in front of him thumbs up if you think so
scottpottorffrox 7 months ago
lol...... nuff said
zilnil 7 months ago
kid so this video pretty much says you like dick.
TheLolpinkpig 7 months ago
nice hat where can i buy one? LOL
TheLolpinkpig 7 months ago
u suck dude!!!
mrlionel370 7 months ago
wanabe rapper!
gk1442 7 months ago
your mother should of swallowed you
TheBruisebar 7 months ago
u r one retarted kid i am only 10 and i rap better then u just die already dummmm assss
techdeckgirl131 7 months ago
From the east cost beats fl beats the singer john shit bitch..
zackwords 8 months ago
my farts are cooler then u --- u blow STOP RAPING
crazyboys3o4 9 months ago
Then we will whip you and infect your wounds like your a servant
Then you’ll scream in agony because i took a piss in your disinfectant
Don’t push me dude im just as fucking crazy as Charlie Sheen
All it takes to unleash this beast is a mars bar and a couple of capsules of caffeine
Some call me a motherfucker i can tell you thats a fucking fact
I fucked your mother then i stepped on a crack to break her back
AcrylicMC 11 months ago
If you get in a fight or Even bite dude I can go ten times faster than that shut bitch
nikkib3224 11 months ago
aye what is the beat to this video?? like what song??
lesbianseagulls 1 year ago
@lesbianseagulls JT Send me connor brown!
psycobillysutter 1 year ago
dud...ur beats are ait...jiz work on your lyrics...
gogiants2 1 year ago
imm 1 i can freestyle better than that
football911911 1 year ago
Everyone shut the fuck up let the kid do what he wants to do cause in the future if he's big i bet he's gonna find all you haters and spit on your face !
DevilProductions1997 1 year ago
nothing rymes !!
flyguyviky 1 year ago
fail nails dont rot they rust
TheAndone57 1 year ago
Throwing saucers? wtf
Ry4nH4m1ll 1 year ago
god damn that was soo fucking bad
borntolose777 1 year ago
Lil Wayne got nothing on you man X)
Giodude22 1 year ago
ya suk mate
cchuntr 1 year ago
Ok 1st stop trying to be black 2nd dont use that fake voice 3rd find a larger vocabulary and more multi syllable words 4th nails dont rot they rust ;)
8barrbarr8 1 year ago
everybody stfu hes just imitating lil wayne. just without auto tune..
patnwat 1 year ago
THE WORDS DONT EVEN RIME
IFPD13 1 year ago
your the worst raper in the world
IFPD13 1 year ago
u SUUCCKKKKK
1965LELE 1 year ago
this fucking sucks!
Jtp101z 1 year ago
throwing sausers
5eddyr 1 year ago
wtf is this go get a life ur a crap rapper, it hardely ryhms it more like a retard sucking him tiny cock
TheJenArmstrong 1 year ago
there once was a man from namtakit,
who saw this guy ryhming and thourght fuck it,
i will jump, show my skin, run ring after ring,
i'll show you whats up and make show you know whos the king,
now you best leave this shit alone cause rappings my thing,
if you reply to this with somthing that is lyrically retarded,
im gonna have to come over there and finish what you started.
.........now thats whats up.
lachlanSB 1 year ago
get envy? maby bite? rotten like a nail? throwing saucers? if you make a sound they throw you in juvi? what ever.
lachlanSB 1 year ago
rotten like a nail wat u retard
redmonstermonkey 1 year ago
hey i made a rap song too my very first one but god damn this is really bad and im just beginning, i wouldn't mind giving you some advice if you asked.
mind checking out my song on my channel? i wrote it, its my very first song ever rapped from me so i would like some feedback.
iamwtcfamous 2 years ago
cmon man. you gotta speed up. it look like yous readin from a screen dog. please.. your in what? 5th grade? im in school to.. never use school as a rap subject. opinion. and get better raps. have you ever even heard rap? cuz man you gotta no this is breakin the law. no offense. sorry to be harsh.
TheColedawg5 2 years ago
whas that yours fucking......shit.
Ganetike 2 years ago
speed up! rap faste
get some beats so your cap skill can get larger
You still rap to slow
rap faster and follow the flow :p lol
ActionFreestyle 2 years ago
all ur rips suck cock!
adxoxocrisp 2 years ago
dude that was fucking garbage...
N1N3TR3YBL00D 2 years ago
wow, i geuss you dont go to school dumbass. and no they dont turn you into a fool they teach you how to make it in life and be able to get a job.
superflyd0g 2 years ago
What.....the fuck.......was that......
YTviewer118 2 years ago
And let em get this straight, if i fight you you'd bite me? Yo this shit is wack just delete your self from life nerd
fuckthefuckable 2 years ago 10
Man, I'll rpa battle you sometime, post a vid in a month and see if it compares
fuckthefuckable 2 years ago
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fuckthefuckable 2 years ago
*Cough*
Stalifax 2 years ago
that ending was THA SHIZZZNIT!!!!
oldschoolhunter 2 years ago
Even you had to shake your head in disgust. You should stick to collecting baseball cards.
captaincaylan 2 years ago 2
this kid makes my day better. When my day sucks.. i look at this kids. His day must be rotten like a nail. hahahaha kid make a new rap u crack me up
handsup11 2 years ago
llllooooossssssseeeeeeerrrrrr
come on guys every one here is a better rapper than this kid give me a thumbs up
pr3dator33 2 years ago 26
4 real take the penn state gear off. U makein my team look bad kid
handsup11 2 years ago 2
kid, you know you can't rhyme
cmon man, you're wastin your time
your raps are so lame
and they all sound the same
you really can't rap
dude it sounds like crap
and your rap about school
made me f**king hate you.
anyone like this rap (at least more than his) please leave me a comment about what you liked, or even send me your own rap, and trust me...it CAN'T be worse than his!
koolkid1 2 years ago 3
words...can't.....describe.....how much......i.....will......FUCKING KILL YOU!!!!! i mean DAMNIT kid! can't you hear how much you suck?! i mean my god! and i lick dick? wtf was that?! and finally, school is NOT the reason YOU'RE a fool...and you probably get detention and probation and stuff cuz u piss the hell out of everyone with your lame ass rhymes!!!!!!
koolkid1 2 years ago
BITCH!!! you suck ass! i mean...GAWD YOU SUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dude you give all white rappers a bad name! i mean come on! i suck, but there's two things that seperate me from you:
1. i KNOW i suck
2. i don't suck AS much as YOU!!!
(p.s.) if anyone wants me to make a better rhyme than him RIGHT now, i'll do it.
koolkid1 2 years ago
Jail nail..HA HA
Nissan240sxImport 2 years ago
officers saucers LOL
assheadproductions 2 years ago
i like dick ???? wtf??
kagrimes1994 2 years ago
Rotten like a nail -.0
NicholasLeroy 2 years ago
you= GAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
anthonyizbest 2 years ago
ur a reatarded bitch. go suck a dick nigga dn take some meds to come ur bitchass down.
vader31x 2 years ago
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1famousperson 2 years ago
plz plz tell me where you live cause i wanna beat the shit out of you
UnhingedAlteration04 2 years ago
ur da type of kid i just wanna punch in da face get a fucking life bitch u fucking suck go fucking die get some friends
azn19girl 2 years ago
is this meant to be a joke? honestly i cant tell if its a joke or hes just a fukin idiot hoo thinks he can rap
edwinaisobese 2 years ago
Dude do ur friends even tell u, u suck? Ur probly just a rich boy who thinks u can do everything. just shut up
CrackedRoadz 2 years ago
he aint rich look at tht couch
greycrestjumper123 2 years ago
you.. are the love of my life.
TiFFOHNAYY 2 years ago
man u still need to hit puberty and the u would still suck
xstraightuphatex 2 years ago
EPIC FAIL
Kakarot1436 2 years ago
suk ur mum u fuck ugly cunt stain suk ur nan
bannanaboy789 2 years ago
you juss waisted 1:17 of my lif
UnhingedAlteration04 2 years ago
who the fuck says shawty want a hug
UnhingedAlteration04 2 years ago
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!
enough said.
vizzez 2 years ago
r u serious
Dmolinski 2 years ago
nooo, just stop tryin man, like really, half of the real guetto people actualy want to go to school, and get an education, but they have to work or help out there familys, like really, ur not too cool budd
evlavictoire 2 years ago
wow u suck ass!!! your a disgrace to real MCs
dagraz372 2 years ago
u lik dick wow u fag
ImpassiveT 2 years ago
ur gay u lick dick the hat makes u look gay to so get another
colt45babydo 2 years ago
fucking terrible
hoodikov31 2 years ago
you will go to detention for this!
Theowest 3 years ago
some kids just cant rap.
, it looks like you wrote this five minutes before the video.
get real gangsta hats FOO.
littlemrross 3 years ago
that was the most terrible thing ive ever heard in my life,, i even heard a half a retard that used 2 b in my highschool sing better rhymes.. n he cudnt even barely finnish a senetnce when he talked... like wow.... POSER OR WUT lmfao
TurnerTheHOOCH 3 years ago
if you bite during a fight they wont throw you in jail. they will kick youre ass because you is a pussy.....
darthmauller123 3 years ago
whats the beat to this dude ? i need it for some of my videos and keep up da good work am sure u will get better in time
GameoverHabbo 3 years ago
i can write rhymes better than that, sum1 gimmi a subject and i will write a quick 1
hawk12399 3 years ago
is this a joke
jWarcloud 3 years ago
stop to read ur text ur to slow make u flow
jerome240392 3 years ago
your insane
bryce1111111 3 years ago
hahah john your kool haha
goddess9427 3 years ago
woah kid your a fkn gangster. not
CRyan691 3 years ago
BOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!
Jyro17 3 years ago
oh my god wat a freak
jk
but john u aint a rapper
christiang808 3 years ago
sorry but you are too white to rap eminem is the only sick rapper good try
jwr20082012 3 years ago