Can only point to all the other posts for what I think of this production.
It hit me right in the heart (and guts). Very well written and performed! You are good at grabbing the essence and deliver it right there at the screen...
I could tell this was made around Christmas (Not sure how) ... then I checked the upload date and saw I was right! This has such a refreshing vibe and a very very very christmas esque new and hopeful feel that is at the same time stunted by the awkwardness of life. Much love you guys. Carboni you are the man. Keep doing shorts bro
Everything was great, just needs more. Left with this feeling of wishing you new what already happened and what's to come. Would love to see more work like this.
Important thing to learn: be prepared to converse. However there is a difficulty, emotions.
Nice acting by Carboni, I think he did a good job. Photography was good, and Ella did good acting as well.
Carboni did a great job. I really like it how he sings those lyrics, he responds a quick 'yeah' to Ella's question, then is totally silent and sad throughout the rest of the short. Poor guy, so sad about her leaving, couldn't even say good bye. Great emotion.
Great job. I watched this because Indy Mogul/Bobby Miller posted something about it, but I really enjoyed it! Loved the colors and the way you shot it. And I thought both the actors did wonderfully. (p.s. I miss mix TAPES instead of Cds) :D
@Lizeelou2 I miss mix tapes too. I still have one from an ex-gf and I still have the tape player to it as well. I do still like the songs as I go back to a younger age in my mind while listening to it. Haven't listened to it in years now though.
I was linked here from TheHill88's Twitter comment and rated this 5 stars cuz I know how hard goodbye's are, even if it's only for a couple weeks.
When I was a senior in high school I was dating a woman that was a freshman in college. I was 18 and she was 20. I was so in love with her and it was at the end of her college semester. She lived in South Dakota in a city about 5 hours from me here in Iowa and it was so hard to say goodbye.
Excellent cinematography! The shot of her under the limb of the tree is very beautiful and expressive.
The acting is very good, as well. It demonstrates how powerful it can be when actors embody very particular intentionality in specific ways.
The dramatic tension created is impressive, given the length. We find out a lot about the characters in a very short time, very efficiently (for example, brushing his teeth connects with what later becomes clear regarding his hopes).
I still love the look Anthony's character gives Ella at 2:21. So good. And whenever I watch this I hear the line from The Departed in my head: Your vulnerability is really freaking me out right now.
Awkwaaaaard.
itsMapleTV 6 months ago
that was pretty good foreplay! can't wait to see the second installment :))
Rawego 1 year ago
goddamn, man up you fag. why the hell is that guy dressed so effeminately?
MrOver9000dollars 1 year ago
Excellent work, but please dump the crash zooms and hand-held-as-a-style cinematography: they already look trite.
ttcherrick 1 year ago
Can only point to all the other posts for what I think of this production.
It hit me right in the heart (and guts). Very well written and performed! You are good at grabbing the essence and deliver it right there at the screen...
Many Greetings... Thofus.
thofus 1 year ago
This is such a sweet, sad little short. Great work. Simply beautiful.
tman12563 1 year ago
The only thing that kept me from yelling: "Kiss her! Kiss her!" was the fact that I want Ella all for myself. :$
Also: Holy crap, Ella can act!
Cutlesnap 1 year ago
5 people are justin bieber fans
Drunksonic 1 year ago
Very good. I especially liked how her legs shook in the silhouette shot of her as he climbed the tree. I sometimes do that when I'm nervous.
botanyboy2 1 year ago
loved it, so simple
FredrikFlintstone 1 year ago
Someone said, "Everytime I say good bye, I die a litlle", that is the feeling that this message that this short film leaves in my heart.
Hulkmania316 1 year ago
I could tell this was made around Christmas (Not sure how) ... then I checked the upload date and saw I was right! This has such a refreshing vibe and a very very very christmas esque new and hopeful feel that is at the same time stunted by the awkwardness of life. Much love you guys. Carboni you are the man. Keep doing shorts bro
cdainmiller 1 year ago
That is so Peter Parker and Mary Jane Watson!!!
quinlanguy101 1 year ago
I just realized it's basically Peter Parker and MJ!
walterwoodsiv 1 year ago 8
Well acted. Nicely layered too. He seemed more broken up about things than she did. Good stuff. Definitely felt it.
Krumpenstein 1 year ago
I love a cute redhead
SalchichaPolaca 1 year ago 6
This was touching. Nice job.
thefranstastics 1 year ago
Captured the awkwardness of some people very well!
Depressing.
SuperDisco91 1 year ago
i just want to say this was flippin great!!
betteparker1234 2 years ago
I really liked this. Great acting, especially Ella. Really captured that awkward moment!
richardpatrick32123 2 years ago
sad
ruonddogross 2 years ago
Very nice acting for an Amateur short
michaelmas10 2 years ago
Very nice short! It really seems to capture how awkward leaving can be. What did you use to shoot it? The high def looks amazing. (So does Ella :) )
fhantazm 2 years ago 2
@fhantazm hey thanks man! it was shot on an hpx170 by an awesome DP named Bob Geile. See the description for links to his other work.
embrown23 2 years ago
I like this. Well done! It reminds me of my ex and I. Though in our case, she was American, and I'm Australian.
markiduval 2 years ago
@JackingToPreggoVids Ella would eat you for breakfast.
w00tangel 2 years ago
I prefer oatmeal, but I'll keep my options open.
ellamorton 2 years ago
Everything was great, just needs more. Left with this feeling of wishing you new what already happened and what's to come. Would love to see more work like this.
DynastyOfWhatnots 2 years ago
Thanks for sharing!
embrown23 2 years ago
KIWI!
adamchang1000 2 years ago
Well done!! Too classy for YouTube though!?
laserteeth 2 years ago 2
@laserteeth I would much rather be 'too hot for YouTube,' but I'll take classy in a pinch.
acarboni 2 years ago
I'll take "classy" too :)
embrown23 2 years ago
really good...fresh and confident vision
emotion999 2 years ago
Thank you!!!!!
embrown23 2 years ago
nicely done by all involved.
nomiSimple 2 years ago
Love sucks!
OzBros 2 years ago
Awkward for sure.
Important thing to learn: be prepared to converse. However there is a difficulty, emotions.
Nice acting by Carboni, I think he did a good job. Photography was good, and Ella did good acting as well.
Carboni did a great job. I really like it how he sings those lyrics, he responds a quick 'yeah' to Ella's question, then is totally silent and sad throughout the rest of the short. Poor guy, so sad about her leaving, couldn't even say good bye. Great emotion.
TheBigLon 2 years ago
@TheBigLon Thanks, Lon! Much appreciated!
acarboni 2 years ago
LOL AWKWARD
Great work gang, I love it
jamiedubs 2 years ago
Best winter day I've spent yet
Artege 2 years ago
Dang, dude. Makes me think there's really some sexual tension between Anthony and Ella. Could really feel the emotions.
cymonsgames 2 years ago
Great job. I watched this because Indy Mogul/Bobby Miller posted something about it, but I really enjoyed it! Loved the colors and the way you shot it. And I thought both the actors did wonderfully. (p.s. I miss mix TAPES instead of Cds) :D
Lizeelou2 2 years ago
@Lizeelou2 Thanks! And yeah - there's something a little more personal and "handmade" about a well thought-out mixtape.
acarboni 2 years ago
@Lizeelou2 I miss mix tapes too. I still have one from an ex-gf and I still have the tape player to it as well. I do still like the songs as I go back to a younger age in my mind while listening to it. Haven't listened to it in years now though.
wildboy92004 2 years ago
That was properly awkward. I had a more emotional parting when my exchange student from Japan left.
ujdo 2 years ago
I was thinking to myself, "Go ON, man! Go ahead and tell her!"
CaptKundalini 2 years ago
I was linked here from TheHill88's Twitter comment and rated this 5 stars cuz I know how hard goodbye's are, even if it's only for a couple weeks.
When I was a senior in high school I was dating a woman that was a freshman in college. I was 18 and she was 20. I was so in love with her and it was at the end of her college semester. She lived in South Dakota in a city about 5 hours from me here in Iowa and it was so hard to say goodbye.
This video seems simple but emotions are complex.
wildboy92004 2 years ago
Excellent cinematography! The shot of her under the limb of the tree is very beautiful and expressive.
The acting is very good, as well. It demonstrates how powerful it can be when actors embody very particular intentionality in specific ways.
The dramatic tension created is impressive, given the length. We find out a lot about the characters in a very short time, very efficiently (for example, brushing his teeth connects with what later becomes clear regarding his hopes).
Nice work!
dschimpf 2 years ago
Excellent pauses and quiet bits. I love how important silences are
acoustickeith 2 years ago
This is very simple but VERY sweet.
phampants 2 years ago
I still love the look Anthony's character gives Ella at 2:21. So good. And whenever I watch this I hear the line from The Departed in my head: Your vulnerability is really freaking me out right now.
: )
TheHill88 2 years ago
yes it really is! :)
embrown23 2 years ago
OMG is that a cassette player?!
bbsoccergamer 2 years ago
You really got to love the old tech that you can find still running are.
dalekkiller 2 years ago