Good poem but shouldn't a love poem be directed to the girl? Like not talk generally about how good she is for you and say stuff like: As you go past a garden all roses bow for your beauty? Anyway nice poem.
Well, I'd surely love to, but you see, the only way to allow you exclusivly to read my story without revealing it too far, (it is unfinished) to the rest of the world would be by way of a PM. And to do so would mean to type out the pages and pages of words I have thus far, which would take up most of my study time. I apologize, but perhaps I should wait for a more convienient time.
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nimanikahansika 9 months ago
aww That is so sweet i wish my boyfriend did stuff like that and put it on youtube
ilovegod555 2 years ago
Good poem but shouldn't a love poem be directed to the girl? Like not talk generally about how good she is for you and say stuff like: As you go past a garden all roses bow for your beauty? Anyway nice poem.
Bombastrelopas 2 years ago
every 1 has their way of doing things.
biblemanpedro 2 years ago
I know you are right still it's cool :).
Bombastrelopas 2 years ago
thanks.
will you please send this video or share this video with all your friends and tell them to do the same please?
i really want this video to spread thru youtube.
will you please do that?
biblemanpedro 2 years ago
Sure no probs I will tell it to anyone i know ;).
Bombastrelopas 2 years ago
THANKS SOO MUCH!
biblemanpedro 2 years ago
Very well written. It speaks to the heart.
Love it.
maggiehall 2 years ago
thanks.
do u write any?
biblemanpedro 2 years ago
Mostly for fun, but i'm not too good
maggiehall 2 years ago
u shud show me some.
i wud like 2 read em.
wut kind do u write?
biblemanpedro 2 years ago
Well, the one i'm working one right now is written. It's a fantasy of sorts. I only write stuff when i'm bored in class.
maggiehall 2 years ago
thats when i get all of my ideas usually.
can u show me wut u have so far?
biblemanpedro 2 years ago
Well, I'd surely love to, but you see, the only way to allow you exclusivly to read my story without revealing it too far, (it is unfinished) to the rest of the world would be by way of a PM. And to do so would mean to type out the pages and pages of words I have thus far, which would take up most of my study time. I apologize, but perhaps I should wait for a more convienient time.
maggiehall 2 years ago
yeah i get it.
so does that mean i wont read it?
biblemanpedro 2 years ago
Probably not. I'd like to let you see it, though.
Maybe later
:)
maggiehall 2 years ago
ok then.
thanks,
biblemanpedro 2 years ago
WO_OW! That was beautiful poem.
yugioh1985 2 years ago
thanks
biblemanpedro 2 years ago