One Love Poem By Pedro Hernandez

[ilovegod555]

aww That is so sweet i wish my boyfriend did stuff like that and put it on youtube

[Bombastrelopas]

Good poem but shouldn't a love poem be directed to the girl? Like not talk generally about how good she is for you and say stuff like: As you go past a garden all roses bow for your beauty? Anyway nice poem.

[biblemanpedro]

every 1 has their way of doing things.

[Bombastrelopas]

I know you are right still it's cool :).

[biblemanpedro]

thanks.

will you please send this video or share this video with all your friends and tell them to do the same please?

i really want this video to spread thru youtube.

will you please do that?

[Bombastrelopas]

Sure no probs I will tell it to anyone i know ;).

[biblemanpedro]

THANKS SOO MUCH!

[maggiehall]

Very well written. It speaks to the heart.

Love it.

[biblemanpedro]

thanks.

do u write any?

[maggiehall]

Mostly for fun, but i'm not too good

[biblemanpedro]

u shud show me some.

i wud like 2 read em.

wut kind do u write?

[maggiehall]

Well, the one i'm working one right now is written. It's a fantasy of sorts. I only write stuff when i'm bored in class.

[biblemanpedro]

thats when i get all of my ideas usually.

can u show me wut u have so far?

[maggiehall]

Well, I'd surely love to, but you see, the only way to allow you exclusivly to read my story without revealing it too far, (it is unfinished) to the rest of the world would be by way of a PM. And to do so would mean to type out the pages and pages of words I have thus far, which would take up most of my study time. I apologize, but perhaps I should wait for a more convienient time.

[biblemanpedro]

yeah i get it.

so does that mean i wont read it?

[maggiehall]

Probably not. I'd like to let you see it, though.

Maybe later

:)

[biblemanpedro]

ok then.

thanks,

[yugioh1985]

WO_OW! That was beautiful poem.

[biblemanpedro]

thanks