Hi!
Ik kom uit nederland :)

Mooi kanaal!

You want honesty?
ok, remember, I mean only to help. First, good production (midi?)
2.) good pitch and phrasing. 3.) good power near end, has a powerful effect.
4.) brace yourself just a little, 5.) your vibrato at the start does not do well here. Try to hold voice AT pitch, no vibrato.
(use it later).
I lkie the song, practice stonger voice throughout.

Not bad, it would probably sell well at Christmas

your gd mate but can still hear your accent, try a faster song

i luv ur songs ur gr8.....go get em tiger